I just barely finished the demo for Maive and I have to say I love the entire thing!
The characters are quite nice and pleasant to interact with from a player's point of view! The music is some of the most relaxing music I ever heard anywhere and I love it so much! I love the storytelling aspect of the story, and even more, I love how the story is told to Lennie! I can't wait to see more of that story telling format for the other stories you'll be hearing!
Now to the feedback! The last conversation, the one with Lennie, feels a little drawn out and begins to lose your attention from the length. Maybe there could be a symbol above a character to let you know of longer dialogue, but of course you do not need to do this if it's not what you feel should be in the game.
And this has to do not with the content, but with the demo specifically, but at the end of it at the bridge, I was easily able to walk on top of the barrier on the left side of the bridge allowing me to go further. I wanted you to be aware of that, as that could lead to people experiencing more of the game than you want them to in the demo.
To finish off, I also absolutely love the graphics! It's so simple and enjoyable to look at, which makes the experience all the better! Everything put together gives an extremely pleasant and peaceful vibe that I love with all my heart!
Overall, thank you so much for the experience, even if it was just the demo! This game has so much potential!